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Clare Frances's avatar

Wow. And ending with Come and See, damn. Not sure if it’s meant to be a film reference but certainly works as one. Well done!

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DJMP's avatar

I like your interpretation. I think that the title of that film works wonderfully to describe it.

It's a stark and powerful phrase and really sends a shiver down my spine. Thank you for your praise and thoughtful comment!

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Ellis Wiens's avatar

The imagery of ruin, the iconography of our cyclical history, a great poem brimming with cathartic angst! I enjoyed it a lot.

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DJMP's avatar

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your kind words!

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Josh Datko's avatar

Yeah. Felt this one. 😪

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DJMP's avatar

Glad it resonated with you Josh. I look forward to seeing all you've done in Slovakia! (Wow)

Safe travels

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